How To Make Your Voice Sound Sweet Does Rhyming Make My Poem Sound Cliche? What Do U Think Of It?

Does rhyming make my poem sound cliche? what do u think of it? - how to make your voice sound sweet

To my dear husband, Faisal

I never thought I could someone who so much love
Etchings on my heart feels your contact information

His love sweet voice is what my ears Crave
Way it is making them happy, what my heart wants to learn

There are no words to tell you how I feel in your arms
I had turned my feet by your charms

My love for you grows every day
Happy to stay together forever is what I want